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The Unwanted Writings

The DP tags your poetry "inappropriate". So what are you gonna do? You can't just let your words go unsaid! So, you put it down here, at The Unwanted Writings. This is where Edgar Allen Poe, Walt Whitman, and many other famous poets would have gone, their poetry deemed "inappropriate". Maybe you're just tired of having to resubmit your poetry so many times, because it seems that no matter how much you study it and look over it, it never goes with the Holy Format.
Whatever your reason, I hope you have found the place to put your poetry where others may enjoy it.

Rules:
(Yes, there a some rules)

1. This not the place to put hate poetry, or poetry that is way too sexualy explicit.

2. Please try not to put in poetry that has a large amount of expletives. A few are alright, just not three or four every line.

3. Put the title at the beginning and the author at the end, and try to use as the best grammar you can. Go by what others have, but other than that, there's no format.

4. Also, make sure to put your poem at the end of the page. Thanks!

Ok, I've decided to put some "polishers" up here. Polisher is a person who fixes the lower case, emboldens things, adds (') those, etc. Polishers have to be on alot, and the reasons I have their names up here is so that if they accidentally mess your poem up, you can talk to them about it and get it fixed. I'm not in need of any polishers, but who knows when I will be? Here they are, anyway:

Polishers
[Your Favorite Stranger]
[hh]
If your poem has been messed up, just give one of us a yell!

That said, write away!

Woo i'm soo honoured to be the first person on here!

My Family Portrait

Daddy brought a gun home today
He said he wouldn't use it.
He said that mommy broke his heart
He said she abused it.
And daddy said his life is over.

Daddy and mommy gave me Ella.
Last night daddy told us we were going to take a bath
But daddy just stood there touching us.
Ella cried but daddy laughed.

Daddy took Ella to the living room.
He told her to lie down.
Daddy unzipped his pants,
Ella started to frown.
Ella screamed.

I ran to Daddy's study
And rumaged through his stuff.
I worried about what he'd say,
He hasn't hit me enough.
Daddy never smiles anymore though.

I found the gun in daddy's drawer.
It was dark and shiny and big,
But i heard Ella screaming my name so I ran.
Daddy's gun was dangerous
But it would fix everything.

Suddenly I heard Daddy shouting naughty words
That he used to call my mommy.
I ran into the room but Ella was naked.
She started crying and ran to me
But daddy had a knife.

But daddy walked towards El
Holding it in his hand.
And Ella ran towards me
But daddy still screamed his demand.
He told her to lie down but she kept going.

I didnt like the way daddy was acting.
He wasn't normally like this.
He loved me, El and mommy so much
I wanted to shoot but I'd miss.
So i took El to the kitchen.

I sat her on the worktop
And told her not to worry.
"Soon Daddy will be gone
But he's really really sorry
That he hurt you El."

I went back to Daddy.
I saw him sitting and crying.
He saw the gun I was holding
And he said he was sorry
But I knew he was lying.

I went up to Daddy and stood up tall
And so,
I whispered the words "I'm sorry Daddy
You have to go."
And Daddy fell to the ground.

[ninja.kicks.ass]

Dirty Girl

Dirty girl, on the street.
To make her trip you stick out your feet.
There she goes, watch her fall,
Run away as she cracks her skull.
Naive strangers, telling me
They let her go, in death's she free.
Telling lies to pass the time,
Letting smack tell them it's fine.
Chain reaction, here we go.
The cops are coming; quick, let's go.
Every man for their own lives,
Everyone's living a lie.
Smokers watching me,
They only pretend to be free.
I hold the truth, I've got the light.
No one's all right in nobody's sight.
Dirty girl was on the street
The smokers were watching me.
To make her trip, I stuck out my feet.
I let her go, in death she's free.

[nokaredes]

Pain

You start getting tired,
struggling for breath,
The pain creeps up,
and worsens the stress.

Life deteriorates
before your eyes.
The pain creeps up,
for all your lies.

The destruction starts,
to take its toll.
The pain creeps up,
and eats your soul.

You find a gun,
pointed at your head.
The pain creeps up,
and leaves you dead.

Written by [tenshi-ryuu]

Who

What do you see, eyes, what do you see?
Are you thinking when you are looking at me-
A chubby girl, panties all in a bunch,
The quiet kid who sits with outcasts at lunch,
Who’s the girl with whom you’d rather be friends,
When you know because of you her faith in god will soon end,
Who seems to look over the signals you send,
And forever is nothing more than a friend,
Who now has cancer because of the choices you made,
Whose glances you dodge until her face fades.
Is that what you’re thinking? Is that what you see?
Then open your eyes world,
YOU’RE NOT LOOKING AT ME!

I’ll tell you who I am, as I walk my slow pace,
As I am surrounded by people who don’t see my face:
I’m a person with feelings that are yet to be felt,
Because it seems no romantic cards have been dealt;
A twinkle of hope is still in here somewhere,
A sought after light that I treat with great care;
A time son will come when that light will go out,
A time in the near future, I hold no doubt;
At my place, now I have the bottom rung to myself,
It’s a position I relish, but it’s my own little shelf,
A veteran at irony, a master of desire,
I hope that my twinkle will one day be fire.

written by [angrybuddhas.]

That Instant

As I wait to cross the street
I see the “walk” sign blink.

Although I've heard of drunk-driver deaths
I still don't stop to think.

I take some steps into the street
And hear a sudden screech.

Next thing I know I'm stuck to steel
Like some blood-sucking leech.

In that instant I didn't stop to think
About the horrid consequences of taking just one drink.

Then my life flashed before my eyes
In just one sudden thought.

All the moments good and bad
That every day had brought.

I hear paramedics saying
Prayers under their breath.

But that Instant of carelessness
Brought me to my death.

Written by [Moving on in Life]

I Did

Went to a party
heres what they said
have a drink
just one drink
so i did

started dancing
drinking hard
someone passed me a pill
told me to take it
so i did

loopied up
having fun
saw the bowl
they said hit it once
so i did

a few more hits
a ton more drinks
i saw the line
they said snort it
so i did

trippin hard
seeing stars
saw the boy
he said come to my car
so i did

sweaty bodies
empty minds
the condom tore
he said dont care
so i didn't

nine months later
can't see my feet
swelled so big
im paying the price
for what i did

took the gun
wrote the note
but it to my head
blew the hole
now im dead

Written by [evil penguin]

The other side

A bully once came up to me
Came up to me and said

"Give me all your lunch money,
Or I'll lodge my fist inside your head"

In shock and awe and horrendous fear
I forked over all my cash

I couldn't help but ask myself
"why was he so harsh?"

Now I stand, just right here
Down an empty hall

With someone's colloar in my fist,
And his back against the wall

One side tells me to beat him up
Because that's half the fun

But the other side screams
"drop him! Just drop the kid and run!"

SO quickly I make a simple choice,
As I lower him to the ground

I let him go and watch him run
Because a new path I have found

Written by [Moving on in Life]

Untitled

Wherefore art thou, oh my love?
No one knows.
Except to say thou aren't at home.
I gasp then run;
'Tis as I feared;
Thou hadst spoken of thy death as it neared.
I run; I stumble, I trip and fall,
But knowing i must get to thee above all
Driveth me onward, maketh me take
Desperate measures to follow in thy wake.
I know where to find thee,
Thou explained it quite clear,
How to get from here to there.
And so I ran, with heart beating,
Legs flying, I ran to the place i knew thou i would'st find.
And find thee I did: thy silent deed was done:
Thou layest quite cold in a puddle of blood.
I threw myself down, pulled thee into my arms,
Crying and sobbing and kissing thee hard.
But nothing happened, twas all for naught:
Thy beautiful soul, Death's minions had caught.
I looked down at mine body, covered with thy own life,
Inspired by thought, I searched for the knife
That had stabbed my love's heart.
I clutched it, then whispered, "I come where thou art."
So saying, I plunged the knife deep.
A moment of pain, then I fell in a heap.
The last moments of my life, my end of the race,
But it was soon over and I was greeted by thy face.

Written by [Your Favorite Stranger]

Broken Mirror

I look into my mirror
And she stares back at me.
Long we glare at one another;
No end is close to see.

Who's eyes within this face are set?
Who's hair of golden hue?
Who's tears are these that stream
From eyes of darkest blue?

Who's face is this, so very sad?
Who's eyes with shadows wrought?
Who's brows now crease together
With every weary thought?

I smile at this stranger,
Conjured from out my mind.
To my surprise, she smiles back;
At least she has the time.

I laugh aloud, and so does she,
'Tis like we're both the same,
Soon I find myself wondering
'Does she maybe have a name?'

We start off simply looking,
And then we get to talking,
Soon, we do it everyday;
I before the mirror stalking.

I stare into the mirror;
But not her face I see:
Instead, there is a demon there,
Reaching out for me.

I try to run away,
But the demon from the mirror
Follows, grabbing for me,
Its hands are getting nearer.

I get a close up view of it,
And to my horror find
The face it wears upon its head
Is nothing less than mine!

Terrified beyond all words,
I look, and pray to find
Something with which to break
The mirror, left behind.

A book, it is my saviour!
I throw it at the glass,
The demon- now it shatters,
Upon the lively-hood of my past.

I fall with it to the floor,
I share this demon's pain.
Horrified, I realize
All my efforts were in vain:

The mirror held the image
Of what I had become.-
My mind now oh so broken-
My body begins to numb.

I stare blindly at the mirror,
Now shattered on the floor,
Millions of tiny images
Of what is never more.

Written by [Your Favorite Stranger]

Peace

I stare into the mirror
Eyes of deep brown look back
Shadows pain in blood all behinde them
Like glass holding in an ocean
Of crimsion red and blue
No one knows what I've seen no not even you
I've told all my secrets and then a little more
But still you dont know what lies behinde the door
The door that leads into me
Like a rotten apple core
Slowly ripping apart my insides
Making me all torn
Cries and sobs escape me
In the darkest night
I think that I'm Alright
But we all know im not
Im destrought with thoughts of death
Losing my last breath
Horror pain and murder are in my little world
Twist and turning mixing together in a whirl
No one knows whats happening in my little mind
No one trys to find out by being oh so kind
As to cut open my head
Lay upon my corpse
Kill me on the bed
See the crimson blood ive shed
And whisper sweet words into my ear
Kiss away the tears from blank eyes staring
No one even caring
That as you pleasure your self
I'm already dead
On the inside no one sees
That im not who you think
I'm gone from this world
My body begans to stink
Try to wash me clean in your perfect porcelain sink
But my Hands wont wash clean of this blood
That you lowered on me
From a knife so keen to your senses
No one even saw
The terror in my eyes
But its ok
Because soon youll be found
And my body rest in peace

Written by [Ego Diligo Tu]

Imagine

Every morning I am thanking my stars
Feel so lucky having you in my arms
Wouldn't be the same without you,babe
There's not a thing about you I would change
I'm incomplete when you're far away
And when you're here,you make me whole again
At first I really didn't trust it or believe it
I foud someone who will make me say this and mean it.

Couldn't imagine life without you,
I want to wrap my arms around you
You're like a miracle in the month of March
I just want to kiss your face.

Sometimes I have to stop and stare
Might even run my fingers through your hair
Just to see that this is not a dream
I've got to see you smiling back at me
And I'm okay as long as you're okay
Don't have to ask, I know you feel the same
At first I really didn't trust it or believe it
I found someone who could make me say this and mean it.

Written by [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]

Tribute to our Armed Forces

From Pearl Harbor
To Iraq

On us they
Haven't turned their back.

Fighting all night
And fighting all day

Struggling under fire
To keep hostiles at bay.

Fighting for freedom
to uphold all our rights.

Yet when they come home
They hide from "The Lights".

They don't ask for fortune
And they don't ask for fame

Because while they're out there
They all share the same name.

So this is my tribute
For Honor's the call

For the men and women
Who ask for nothing at all.

©2005 Brandon Aaron Bessman

Written by [Moving on in Life]

Sorry everyone, but this page has ran out of room. Please add all future poetry to More Unwanted Writings. Thanks.

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[Your Favorite Stranger]

2005-11-13 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *blinks* eww

2005-11-13 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *walks in and rolls eyes* gez, sander, thanks soo much...actually i was at a play by charles dickens, drood, the unfinished mystery, so there

2005-11-14 [Ego Diligo Tu]: ahhh good good

2005-11-14 [omgOMEGA]: *stares into corner*

2005-11-14 [Your Favorite Stranger]: yeah it was funny as hell too

2005-11-14 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *nods trying to find a GIRL model with a DRESS for a photo shoot

2005-11-15 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *jumpd up and down* oo pick me pick me!!!

2005-11-15 [Ego Diligo Tu]: Find a way down to florida lol

2005-11-15 [Your Favorite Stranger]: ...*becomes stumped*

2005-11-15 [~devils_child~]: *looks down* sry jaime

2005-11-16 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *glares up* sure, emphasize the looking down part

2005-11-16 [Moving on in Life]: Again...I missed alot of stuff....

2005-11-16 [omgOMEGA]: *stares into corner*

2005-11-16 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *dies*

2005-11-16 [~devils_child~]: *starts laughing* i didnt meen it like that jaime

2005-11-17 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *revives liz and laughs sheepishly* well, you know how i am about my shortedtude

2005-11-17 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *sits and crack nuckles*

2005-11-17 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *freaks out*

2005-11-17 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *blinks

2005-11-19 [~devils_child~]: *laughs*jaime is a short perverted BLONDE :D

2005-11-19 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *coughs with big boobscough*

2005-11-19 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *jaw drops* i am not short, you're just tall!!! i am oerverted, and i am blonde *walks up to sander* you wanna make something of it b****? *rolls eyes* yes, with big boobs...geez

2005-11-19 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs happily and fondels own boobs* mine should be bigger..i could get a boob job...

2005-11-19 [~devils_child~]: *laughing*i am not that tall and bring it on im not scared of no one

2005-11-20 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *sighs and mutters* except yourself...*laughs* a boob job huh? *walks around observing* hmm, i dunno...

2005-11-21 [omgOMEGA]: *eyes slowly begin to close*

2005-11-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *considers boob job*

2005-11-21 [~devils_child~]: *laughing yet again*you peoples r crazy

2005-11-22 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *grins* yup, this is where all us rejects come *speaking for self*

2005-11-23 [~devils_child~]: yea speak for yourself

2005-11-23 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *mimicks a little kid pouting and says in a preppy voice* aww, sander gone on to the cool ppl now? leaving us rejects behind? you gonna go kiss shelby's butt too?

2005-11-23 [~devils_child~]: *yelling at top of lungs*i would never kiss up to shelbey never will i got to the cool people even though they r coming to my house (i have to talk to u about that jaime) and please the only thing i would ddo to shelbey is beat her butt not kiss it

2005-11-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *grins* yeah, that's what i thought. they'recoming to your house?!?!?!? yeah, you do have to tell me about this, when? why? *laughs* rock on girl!

2005-11-24 [~devils_child~]: jordan lives in the next neighborhodd over and she is having raven(miss loud mouth o god) monica and melissa(i cant stand melissa) idk what im gonna do *evil grin*but i have ideas

2005-11-24 [~devils_child~]: o and saturday night

2005-11-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: at your place?? or just around? *laughs evily* ideas? this might not be good...so are you feeling better? you scared the ever-living crap out of us last night

2005-11-24 [~devils_child~]: they r coming to my place and im feelin a little better and sorry i didnt meen to u should have just gone to bed and let me bebut my face does hurt!

2005-11-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oh joy...have fun! ok, that's...a little better, lol. i know you didn't mean to, i don't think even you would do something like that on purpose. yeah, right! i wasn't going anywhere until i knew you were gonna be ok. painkiller, or ice or disinfectant

2005-11-24 [~devils_child~]: i told u already no painkiller but will is mad at me

2005-11-26 [Moving on in Life]: And again, I miss much because I cant hardly ever get on.

2005-11-26 [omgOMEGA]: *dies quietly in corner*

2005-11-27 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pokes terni* well those two are ignoring everyone else sso

2005-11-27 [omgOMEGA]: *starts leaking blood out of mouth*

2005-11-27 [~devils_child~]: sry but jaime got in trouble friday

2005-11-27 [omgOMEGA]: *is now dead in a big blood-filled puddle

2005-11-28 [Moving on in Life]: What did she do?

2005-11-30 [~devils_child~]: um i dont wanna get in trouble wit her but she wont be on for awhile her parents got rid of the internet

2005-12-07 [Moving on in Life]: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! LIFE IS OVER! THE WORLD HATH ENDED! I'M DOOMED TO A LIFE OF LONLINESS! NOOO!

2005-12-07 [Moving on in Life]: She got caught lookin at porno, huh? lol

2005-12-08 [Ego Diligo Tu]: Porno

2005-12-09 [Moving on in Life]: I was right?! XD

2005-12-11 [omgOMEGA]: *has died*

2005-12-11 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *shrugs* I dont know Iwas just mimiking you hehhe

2005-12-12 [~devils_child~]: no she wasn't caught looking at porn

2005-12-12 [omgOMEGA]: *is dead*

2005-12-14 [tenshi-ryuu]: ooooh... Pr0n... lol... *shoots [omgOMEGA] until she's undead*

2005-12-16 [omgOMEGA]: *shoots self with a silver bullet and is now dead* *again*

2005-12-21 [Moving on in Life]: So...why's she not here, Devil???

2005-12-21 [omgOMEGA]: hey, I just figured who and why you're calling Devil...

2005-12-24 [~devils_child~]: she told me not to tell you she just told me to tell u guys she loved i cant exactly remember who but you guys know who shes talking to

2005-12-27 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *Pouts* when will she be back I miss my jamie...She misseded My birthday...We need to sing pirate songs and cheer eachother up..

2005-12-28 [~devils_child~]: its gonna be awhile till jaime gets bk

2005-12-28 [omgOMEGA]: *sits in corner* *sigh* no-one ever includes me in anything...

2005-12-29 [Ego Diligo Tu]: You never include yourself in anything. Don't blame others for your lack of confidence and your blatant stupidity and obssesion with being depressed it is not our fault you are just depressing to be around in general and We don't WANT to include you because all you ever do is feel sorry for your self....*looks at shocked faces* we were all thinking it..

2005-12-30 [omgOMEGA]: I was waiting for someone to indicate they wanted me included... hey, you know that poem, "Sarah's Poem"? Why is it up there, since the person didn't write it? Are we allowed to do that?

2006-01-02 [Moving on in Life]: MY JAMIE'S GONE!! *cries* Who's gonna heal when I get chopped to pieces? Who's gonna catch me when I fall from tall buildings thinking I can fly? WHO?! *falls to the ground crying*

2006-01-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pts brandons back*

2006-01-07 [omgOMEGA]: *hides*

2006-01-08 [~devils_child~]: *looking up at how much people r gonna miss her then starts to cry*

2006-01-09 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *sits there* where is she at? Really is she okay? when will she be back....

2006-01-10 [Moving on in Life]: When will she be back?! I WANNA KNOW! *crys louder*

2006-01-11 [~devils_child~]: shes fine but idk when shes coming bk because i barley talk to her now cause she left our school last week

2006-01-11 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *convulses* noooooooooo not jamie...*crys with brandon*

2006-01-12 [Moving on in Life]: *hugs Ego, still crying*

2006-01-28 [omgOMEGA]: *realises no-one has answered her question yet so runs away to eat the corner*

2006-02-03 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *group hugs all of you, and gives terini a kiss* has anyone fallen to pieces, or fallen from tall buildings, or whatever other crazy things you ppl do without me?? omg, i have missed you all so bad!!!! *dusts off favorite chair and sits down* omg, i love you all never knew how much! *wipes tears away* ok, enough emo crap

2006-02-04 [Moving on in Life]: *kisses (not)forgotten back* yay! YOU'RE BACK! *sits on her lap*

2006-02-04 [~devils_child~]: *stares*

2006-02-04 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *huggles me jamie and growls at people who come near*

2006-02-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *smiles at terini and messews with his hair* yes, i'm back, nice to know ya'll missed me! *grins at sander* *huggles liz back* it's like a homecoming or something!

2006-02-05 [~devils_child~]: *smiles and trys to give jaime hug*

2006-02-05 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *lets devil give jamie hug and laughs*

2006-02-05 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *laughs and hugs sander back* i feel so protected

2006-02-06 [Moving on in Life]: yesh ^_^

2006-02-07 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *stabs the bradon then runs away in corner*

2006-02-08 [Moving on in Life]: ouchness...*bleeds* wow....

2006-02-08 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *blinks huddled up in corner and turns into balck kitty mewing*

2006-02-09 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *pulls out a doctor kit from no where, and proceeds to bandage brandon up* *glares at the mewing black kitty* liz...i just got back and i'm back on duty saving his life again!

2006-02-09 [Moving on in Life]: ^_^ I love you too :D

2006-02-10 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks up at you from taking care of the cut* *shakes head smiling*

2006-02-12 [omgOMEGA]: *runs in circles*

2006-02-12 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *mews and licks paw* hisses at brandon*

2006-02-13 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks at the cat* do you want something? like a kick in the butt maybe?

2006-02-14 [~devils_child~]: *smiles*oooo let me do it

2006-02-14 [Moving on in Life]: Nooooo. Let ME do it >:D I kick HARD.

2006-02-14 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *bites brandon and runs away mewing quietly*

2006-02-15 [Moving on in Life]: * chases the black cat and punts it across the room*

2006-02-15 [~devils_child~]: noooo let me do it i've been a soccer player since i was 5 u can ask jaime i kick really hard

2006-02-15 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *has broken kity ribs blood coming out of mouth sitting there rlifeless*

2006-02-17 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks heavenward and crosses self* liz come out of kitty form so i can fix you up

2006-02-18 [Ego Diligo Tu]: turns into bruised bloody liz form* Fuck you brandon!*stalks off limping while doing so*

2006-02-18 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *chases after liz with antiseptic and bandages and painkiller* maybe the painkiller first...

2006-02-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *sits in dark corner crying*

2006-02-22 [~devils_child~]: *watches and doesnt know what to do*

2006-02-22 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *ignites fire wall around me so no one will bother me*

2006-02-22 [~devils_child~]: *walks through fire*um im the devils child i live in fire

2006-02-22 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *glares and growls low* Operor non planto mihi vulnero vos

2006-02-22 [~devils_child~]: *runs out of fire wall*

2006-02-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *goes back to picking at scabs and murming/* When mist fades away to reval a summers day I;ll see your blue eyes again. And when wisdom is gone and turmoil plays I'll be at the moutain again. As the world slithers by and my eyes start to cry Youll be here. with white satin dresses and blue satin sashes for me to wear. But the mis is still fading and the children debating wheather or not today will be fair. So as I am sitting in cold misty hills I;ll wait for the moment that will send chills through my spine. When you come through the mist between the peaks with white satin dresses with and time.

2006-02-25 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *6thinks* i caught no or none and you...interpret the rest please? and liz, would you coe out of the fire so i can get to you,? i can walk through fire if i want, but fire isn't one of my specialties

2006-02-25 [Your Favorite Stranger]: and is that a song? or a poem?

2006-02-26 [Ego Diligo Tu]: Its Don't make me hurt you*lets fire down slowly* and peom i made it into this <img:http://elftown.lysator.liu.se/img/photo/74503_1140965845.jpg>

2006-02-26 [Moving on in Life]: *cries*

2006-03-01 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *hugs terini and cries as well* you say it's a poster? how big? i collect posters, and i've been looking for one with verse on it...this would look good in my room...

2006-03-01 [~devils_child~]: *stares at people crying*

2006-03-04 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *wonders why there crying so crys to*

2006-03-04 [Moving on in Life]: Forgot why he was crying, and stops.*

2006-03-05 [~devils_child~]: *looks at people crying*im totally confused now

2006-03-07 [Moving on in Life]: *elbows Devils lightly and whispers* Me too

2006-03-08 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *sits in corner*

2006-03-09 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *sits on the ceiling* yeah ok

2006-03-09 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *blinks* why all the crying?

2006-03-09 [Moving on in Life]: I unno.

2006-03-09 [~devils_child~]: *looks up*why are u sitting on the ceiling

2006-03-11 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *giggles* cuiz she haas a sticky butt

2006-03-12 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *grins at liz* yes exacty that, now how my butt became sticky is a mystery...* looks at devil* nah, it's just bc i can, i love defying gravity

2006-03-12 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *mumbles thats for stealing me poem*

2006-03-12 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *grins at you* i gave it back remember?

2006-03-13 [Ego Diligo Tu]: but still*whispers to poem* it says you kept reading over and over again*whispers* it says you undressed it with your eyes!*looks shocked then burts out laughing*

2006-03-14 [Moving on in Life]: *looks confused* why all teh wispers?

2006-03-15 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *grins evilly* ahh, that i did, i couldn't help it! it's a very sexy poem, you know!

2006-03-15 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *blinks and starts crying*

2006-03-26 [Your Favorite Stranger]: mon deiu! (sp) *closes eyes* liz, it was a joke. i did not rape your poem

2006-03-27 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *blinks* but it says that *listens to poem* you...touched...its...words!*get shocked/horrified look on face trying not to laugh*

2006-03-27 [Moving on in Life]: WHAT IS IT WITH ALL THESE FOREGIN LANGUAGES! SPRECHEN ZI ENGLISH, DAMNIT! *holds hnd to his head and runs away* AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!

2006-03-27 [Ego Diligo Tu]: Aww brandon arent you able to go and get a translation LOL

2006-03-28 [Moving on in Life]: SPEAK THE ENGLISH

2006-03-28 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *giggles*¡Pero el inglés ahora es diversión a hablar! ¿Tan porqué es no español?

2006-03-29 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *laughs* brandn, i said my god in french and liz said... but the enlgish now is ? to speak. ? why is there no spanish? my mum was born in the azores :D *has been reading to much of Lestat*

2006-03-29 [Ego Diligo Tu]: its practicly but english is boring why not speak spanish!

2006-04-01 [Moving on in Life]: ooooh, ok

2006-04-03 [Your Favorite Stranger]: exactly, spanish is sexy

2006-04-03 [Moving on in Life]: lol

2006-04-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: oh yes*strokes spanish* come to me spanish be my naughty pool boy armando!

2006-04-04 [Moving on in Life]: O.o.....

2006-04-04 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *giggles* did you all see the evil dead korn duckie on my house?

2006-04-07 [Moving on in Life]: No. :(

2006-04-07 [Ego Diligo Tu]: ahhh its cuz of the darn crah I'll have to put ti back up

2006-04-09 [Moving on in Life]: yay!

2006-05-30 [Your Favorite Stranger]: riiiight

2006-05-30 [Linderel]: Just thought I'd tell you, you' ve been included on my listing of Poetry communities.

2006-06-03 [Your Favorite Stranger]: Really?? Hawt!! Lemme check it...

2006-06-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: It doesn't say the nicest of things about it though..

2006-06-03 [Linderel]: If you mean the 'fairly unorganised' part, well... it is. But then again, that is just my opinion.

2006-06-05 [Ego Diligo Tu]: Oh i know. I wasnt trying to say you were being unfair or anything. I agree we are rather unorganised.

2006-06-05 [~devils_child~]: hi peoples long time no talk

2006-06-07 [Your Favorite Stranger]: He's right, it is fairly unorganized...really though, no poetry page is that rganzied, at least the DP isn't

2006-06-07 [Your Favorite Stranger]: and heya devil, miss ya round here..least i do

2006-06-07 [Linderel]: Well, the primary function of the DP submission page isn't really for it to be read, and it works, so. *shrug* However, that is again just my opinion, which quite certainly is biased.

2006-06-07 [~devils_child~]: yea right u didn't miss me

2006-06-07 [Your Favorite Stranger]: Ahh, you did a good job mate, we are unorganized, that's the way we are. also, devil, i did so

2006-06-08 [Ego Diligo Tu]: Dt will be here in 3 DAYS! SOrry had to get that out. *grins*

2006-06-08 [Moving on in Life]: *belches*

2006-06-09 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *confetti blows out into the air, a disco ball appears out of no where, and a bar is suddenly there* Totally freakin awesome liz!!!!! *smacks terini* excuse you. drinks are on me

2006-06-09 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *dances to death cab for cutie* I know he'll be here on saturday so dont expect me to be on really from then till thursday! :D

2006-06-09 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *nods* i won't...nice choise in music, btw

2006-06-10 [Moving on in Life]: *passes out*

2006-06-10 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks at terini with disdain* what's his problem?

2006-06-11 [Moving on in Life]: *pops his head up a second* I had LOTS more to drink before this party...*Drops his head back, closing eyes*

2006-06-11 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *shrugs and grabs a bottle of rum* Your loss. Captain Morgan's Private Stock, I glomp it.

2006-06-13 [~devils_child~]: *stares in amusment and can't find anything to say*

2006-06-14 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks at you* what's so funny???

2006-06-14 [Moving on in Life]: *sits up and grabs a bottle of Jaegermeister, seemingly out of nowhere* mm...good.

2006-06-15 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pouts in corner*

2006-06-16 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *walks slowly over to liz* What's wrong? miss him already?

2006-06-16 [~devils_child~]: *is curious* whos him

2006-06-16 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *nods*

2006-06-16 [Moving on in Life]: Him who?

2006-06-18 [Your Favorite Stranger]: Devil and Terini: Ask EGT. Liz: Anything I can do? I know it sucks.

2006-06-18 [Your Favorite Stranger]: Also, am I the only one watching the latest page, Even More Unwanted Writings?

2006-06-18 [~devils_child~]: ya u probably are

2006-06-18 [Ego Diligo Tu]: Nah im over it know. i am currently trying to figure out his gpa

2006-06-20 [Your Favorite Stranger]: gee thanks devil. *lifts eyebrows* his GPA? whatever for?

2006-06-20 [Moving on in Life]: Ego, Who is him?

2006-06-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: Hime is my boyfriend and his GPA because We were looking up scholarships and colleges. He is in his senoir year you know.

2006-06-20 [Your Favorite Stranger]: Ahh, I see. Whoa, I never thought about that...

2006-06-21 [Moving on in Life]: I didn't know *cries*

2006-06-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *huggles terini* aww, don't cry

2006-06-22 [Moving on in Life]: Ok, I won't....

2006-06-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: good

2006-06-25 [Moving on in Life]: *hugs back*

2006-06-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: yeah, i was wondering when I'd get that....

2006-06-28 [Moving on in Life]: I'm sorry! :(

2006-06-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: It's okay, I got my hug ^_^

2006-06-29 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pokes nose into conversation finds the sent that of rotting honey removes nose promptly*

2006-06-30 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *laughs* aww, your just jealous bc he hugged me this time

2006-06-30 [Moving on in Life]: I'll hug you too, Ego ^_^ *hugs Ego*

2006-07-01 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *licks teri* but hey wants me

2006-07-01 [Moving on in Life]: *licks Ego back*

2006-07-02 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *looks lonely*

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